Check out Thomas' edited and improved piece of writing - 11.1.21

Perched on top of a towering rock that was emerging from the sea was the ruins of an ancient tower. At the bottom of the rock was an opening with a ladder that lead down to a small, wooden canoe. The rock cast a strange looking shadow upon on the glimmering sea and it was unusual.

The tower had lots of windows which let in lots of light, as well as a tall chimney and a small tree that was growing out the edge of the rocks.